journeys into the underworld of thought
by Douglas Messerli
David Kinloch In Search of Dustie-Fute (Manchester, England: Carcanet, 2017)
In his newest book the poem goes on the search for Dustie-Fute, a Scots
figure who is a merchant, a troubadour, a juggler, and in Kinloch’s book “a
figure of Orpheus,” totally appropriate in this case since in a central
poem/essay of this book, “Felix, June 5, 1994,” the poet explores the
photographs of Canadian-born artist A. A. Bronson’s quilt-like works dedicated
to men who have died of AIDS, this poem centered on Bronson’s lover Felix
Partz:
You thread a sea
with your eye;
each time the
needle enters your flank
the pain composes
you;
trees that hung
your voice
among those
patterns
wrap your quilt
in foliage;
a dog barks
through the branches;
a girl’s arm passes like an oar
across the unlit
patches;
now your song
kneels
at the river’s
edge
and will not
flow;
your passport
head is pinned in silk.
It’s not easy to parse this poem; it is after all a kind of gut response
to an awful death, and perhaps it’s simply better to read Kinloch’s own
narrative about the photo and Bronson’s art. But it clearly represents the
poet’s intense insight into the worlds he represents and creates. Given the
almost pin-size head of the original, set against various patterns and colors
of the rest of the work, the last line of this poem is particularly painful. In
death, Felix’s head has definitely become almost insignificant to the song the
work sings about the underworld—the mad swirl of colors and patterns—to which
he has given up his being.
One
of the work’s most brilliant poems takes the viewpoint of Joseph:
Not mine.
The call wasn’t for me. The phone
rang in the next room and it was the Angel.
This multi-sectioned poem is a beautiful
portrait of a man who loves but yet is kept apart from object of that love:
The boy
I teach him. He is grateful.
Holds love back for a future
as big as this nail
I beat into the bench
where it lies almost
flush with the wood.
This lovely piece suggests the gentleness of the patient carpenter,
while at the same time hinting at his sensuous desire for his beautiful son
through the phallic images of the nail which he beats into the wood and the
coming together of that nail with the bench on which, we suspect, the young
Jesus lies. This Joseph, although described as a saint, is not always so
saintly. In “St. Joseph’s Dream,” for example, he expresses what might almost
be envy for his wife’s ability “to shake / hands with the Angel.” And some of
his dreams are violent, particularly when his internal voices speak in his
dreams, compelling him to Flee into Egypt.
Kinloch’s Joseph is a man you might never have imagined in biblical literature
or commentary, a sensual man attempting to make sense of his wife’s mysterious
birth and his “perfect son.”
Some of strongest poems in this moving book, however, come near its end,
where the poet’s Orpheus must now come to terms with his Eurydice. In the long
two poems of “Some Women,” Kinloch gives us entirely new perspectives of
Lilith, Cain’s wife, Adah and Zillah, Sarah, Rebekah, Deborah, Rahab, Ruth,
Bathsheba, the daughters of Job, King David’s concubines, Hannah, Martha, Mary
Magdalene, and others. If this sounds a bit like a religious-based text, think
again. These women are quirky and strong, ur-feminists who recognize their
world and their positions in it are untenable and difficult to negotiate. Mary
Magdalene, for example, seems married to a Christ who demands she “Look
within,” but because of the society in which she exists cannot find any
What I
remember is I was weeping,
and I
turned to the gardener (who looked like
my husband) and I screamed, ‘The body has
gone!’
He told
me to look inside. ‘Look within.’
Two
words. So I think he meant into myself.
I tried
but found nothing. Their questions
never
stop. I feel my bones going off
to
preach on their own, each with a slightly
different
story. ……
Sarah is presented here as a tart-spoken elder, not afraid even of the
angels or the God who has sent them:
Angels
are good for a laugh: they come up
and they
say: ‘God will give you a child.’
I laugh
and I say: ‘I’m ninety!’
They stand up indignant, unfold their wings,
‘You
can’t laugh at God,’ one says.
I laugh and I say: ‘I’m ninety!’
They
leave in a flap and I have a wee boy
called
Isaac who name mean ‘he laughs’.
I laugh
and I say: ‘I’m ninety!’
Kinloch ends his work, appropriately, with a re-visitation to the
Orpheus and Eurydice myth based on Rilke (and a photograph by PaJaMa) and a
strange overlay of the homosexual poet Cavafy with a Syrian refugee from whom
he hears in Glasgow, who demands that he go (perhaps like Mary Magdalene on an
inner journey) to Alexandria. But in this poet’s world anything is possible, as
the voice of the poem suddenly discovers that it is only “nineteen and a quarter
/ mile from Glasgow to Alexandria.” (In fact, there is a Scottish town named
Alexandria new Glasgow.) Indeed, the world has shrunken. Dustie-Fute may exist
just around the corner.
Los Angeles, May 17, 2019
Reprinted from Hyperallergic Weekend, Sunday, June 30, 2019.
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