broadcasting silence
by Douglas Messerli
Larry Eigner watching/how
or why (New Rochelle, New York: The Elizabeth Press, 1977)
Larry Eigner The
World and Its Streets, Places (Santa Barbara, California: Black Sparrow
Press, 1977)
But it is difficult to describe what it is about an Eigner poem that
makes for such an impact. in the first place, Eigner would probably decry any
such attempt. Like many poets writing since the 1950s, Eigner eschews
intellectual analysis of his poems or poetics. And, secondly, the typical
Eigner poem breathes simplicity:
ominous
sinister
the rain
smiles
(TWAIS, p. 11)
Poems such as this, in their
naive-like use of pathetic fallacy, carry with them an illusion of primitivism,
an illusion Eigner himself often perpetuates. Writing recently in a letter to
the magazine Là-bas, Eigner remarked
of his poetics: "I myself go on serendipity.... I'm another H. Rosseau if
not Grandma Moses."
However, while some of his weaker poems never transcend this primitivist
impression of landscape, Eigner's best poems—of which there are many in these
two volumes—reveal a personal involvement with "things" that is as
intellectually sophisticated as the poetry of William Carlos Williams and Ezra
Pound. Indeed, it is to the Pound-Williams tradition that Eigner is most often
linked. As Samuel Charters, in his introduction to Eigner's Selected Poems of 1972, has perceived,
It [Eigner's work] is a
poetry that accepts implicitly the point
of language and image that
Williams had honed out of the
Rutherford, New Jersey,
doctor's office windows....
Eigner's poetry, like Williams', is
of things rather than ideas; as Eigner wrote very recently in L=A=N=G=U=A=G=E, "behind words and
whatever language comes about are things...things and people...." And
Eigner's image is something akin to Pound's "radiant node or
cluster...through which, and into which ideas are constantly rushing."
Thus, while Eigner's images are often grounded in the visual and the aural, the
poems, like Pounds' and Williams', are dependent upon his engagement with the
landscapes he presents. If meaning, as Eigner suggests in The World and Its Streets, Places, "depends on your eyes"
(p. 78), it also depends upon the poet's and, ultimately, the reader's
participation in this world of things.
thunder
planes
I
sneeze
a
lot
of
things
slow
to take
slipped
look
higher than itself
some second ago
the dam
broke
(w/how, p. 36)
In this poem, the thunder, the sound of the plane and the poet's sneeze,
are bound in a sequential relationship that results in both the natural and
emotional releases expressed in the metaphoric "breaking of the dam"
(in rainfall and psychological relief).
Yet here we also see where Eigner's poetry is radically different from
Williams's more tightly controlled "machine of words." What is most
important in the Eigner poem is not syntax or even line break, but the relation
of words through their placement on the page. Superficially, this appears to
have a great deal in common with Olson's theories expressed in his
"Projective Verse," but as Eigner has explained, while Olson saw the
poem as a field of energy, he (Eigner) thinks of the poem as "spatial
quantity" (Charters, quoting Eigner in Selected
Poems, p. xiii). This is a crucial distinction. Whereas Olson's kineticism
demands that the poem be structured around a connective flow of ideation (as
Olson wrote in "Projective Verse," "One perception must
immediately and directly lead to A FURTHER PERCEPTION."), Eigner's use of
space tends to break connections, to sever ideational flow, to isolate and
dissociate words and phrases.
The effect of this, of course, is to put stress on the word, the
syllable and phonemic relationships, which, in turn, forces the reader to
examine the word or syllable and to reevaluate it. Even in a poem that is
primarily thematic we can see this at work.
what a
uniform is
one thing
yellow yellow yellow
star
(allowed
publicly not to wear)
Sol Rossi Mantua
composer court musician
l8th cent. syn
agog sound special
mark
.......................
(TWAIS, p. 173)
In the fragment printed above, Eigner obviously is writing about the
uniform that Jews were forces to wear in persecution, and the rest of the poem
deals with other uniforms which are forced upon people at the expense of their
freedom and individual identity. But just as important as what this is about is how the poem breaks up thematic
continuity. The repetition of "yellow yellow yellow," for example,
pounds yellow into the reader's mind, so saturating it with the color that the
word almost loses meaning and becomes a yell of frustration instead. It is only
in the next line, with the word "star," that the obsession with the
color and that resulting frustration make sense. A few lines later Eigner even
takes apart words, as in "18th cent. syn/agog sound special." The abbreviation
of century, and the separation of the syllables "syn" and
"agog" here allow for all sorts of new linguistic possibilities
(including the concepts of "sin," and the intense excitement of being
associated with that "sin"; the Sol Rossi to which Eigner refers was
a Jewish musician, Salamone Rossi, court musician to the Gonzoga Dukes of
Mantua in the Renaissance), as meaning is derived from prefix and suffix and
attached by the reader to the words surrounding it.
In less thematically oriented poems, moreover, this process is carried
even further.
D e
p t h
a tree
inches felt
distance
a
phonepole the sky slants
Leaves
crying death, death, the wind
in the sun
rises
(TWAIS, p. 102)
Here, except for the possible
continuous flow of meaning between "a tree" and "inches,"
the reader is presented with only fragments. Even more than in the other poem
above, the reader must focus on the phrase, the word, or as in "D e p t
h," on the letter, rather than the continuous flow of ideas. The language
itself, then, its sounds, its rhythms, its denotative meaning wrenched from
associative context, are almost all the reader has to go on. It is no wonder
that the "Language" poets are so attracted to his work.
Just as significantly, however, the emphasis on word and partial phrase
draws the reader's attention to what is not
on the page, to what is missing, to the space which surrounds the isolate
fragments. And it is there, as much as in the language, where Eigner's poems
grown into meaning. In an Eigner poem it is as if most of the words have been
erased, and the few that are left are merely clues to a complex mental
process. The reader must be as attentive
to space, to what happens between lines or between words, as he has been
previously to the words themselves. In the poem above, for example, everything
hinges upon what the reader makes of the space between "distance" and
"a phonepole the sky slants." This forces the reader to participate,
to search beyond the linguistic surface in an attempt to make meaning. In this
process, paradoxically, Eigner's "things"—his "sky,"
"sun," "tree," "phonepole"—although originally
grounded in specificity—become for the reader abstractions, universals which
permit him his own specificity in confronting and resolving the void of
Eigner's space.
Eigner poetically expresses this paradox as "broadcasting
silence" ("the broadcast silence/like the sky," TWAIS, p. 94), a
phrase which recognizes, it seems to me, the separateness of each individual;
what for the reader is meaning can only be expressed by the author as silence,
and vice versa. The shards of Eigner's language, then, serve as touchstones to
the reader's discovery of his own life.
On the other hand, this does not mean Eigner's poems work primarily
through association, that they serve the reader as a sort of Rorschach blot. In
his best poems, reader and poet work together to make the world around them
startlingly new. And there is something serendipitous about this process. One
example will have to serve as illustration:
noise absorbed
in
the air
happiness
is
quiet
have
fun, they say
the
birds lean on bark
and sing
to our ears
(TWAIS, p. 110)
After the thousands of years and
thousands of poems containing bird imagery, there is something truly wondrous
about Eigner's birds leaning on that bark, upon the noise of their own singing.
College Park, Maryland,
1977
Reprinted from PIP (The Project for Innovative Poetry) Blog (June 2013).
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